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Conny Borgelioen's avatar

I love the movement created by "silk web depart the spinneret" and "spring". And then in the last line you get "silent, cold" which is still again, but then "and coiling" which conveys a tension. I imagine these petroglyphs are just eager to jump of the rock on to the projector screen.

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Nina Barufaldi's avatar

I enjoyed the periods — two, then one, one, one. How it was front loaded, then I got to linger in each subsequent stanza. Thanks ☺️

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